Cemented thoughts

Brussels, Belgium.

This morning as my seventh graders filed into my lab for their science class, they were confronted with the tail end of my last class……a slurry of bits of paper, each with a word on it spread haphazardly on the floor.  We were classifying words…science vocabulary….let your mind wander a bit to visualize!  Eva, on her entrance, quickly shouted to the  seventh graders behind her, ‘don’t walk on his words!’.

This phrase caught my ear and immediately I thought that it was the beginning of a poem that needed to be written.  By the end of the day, I came up with the words you find below.  Eva is a harpist and I am going to challenge her to write a piece to on her harp to accompany it.  Then I thought of Paul.  He would ‘get’ this.

ImageDon’t walk on my words

They sprawl on the floor

They carry my thoughts

My long-held mantras

You can build a bridge

To get over them

But they will continue

To whisper

Or even bellow

From under your feet

Tempting you to take heed.

Jump in and

Swim through my words

Let them

Permeate your being

Penetrate your mind

Don’t walk on my words

Rather, walk through them

Amble among their meanings

And take hold of

My thoughts.

2 thoughts on “Cemented thoughts

  1. I LOVE this poem!! Eva is fabulous- I can hear her saying that now, and with such heart felt conviction. We might have to do a little poetry next week in social studies… : )

  2. I wish I could split myself into several different teachers….I am teaching Science but I really miss teaching Language Arts…….poetry is one of my favourites! Thanks, Sara, for reading this……I appreciate ‘feed forward’ on anything!!!

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